Act design – Robert McKee

McKee, Robert. Story: Substance, Structure, Style, and the Principles of Screenwriting. Regan Books, 1997 Progressive Complications Complications increase conflict, forcing characters to face greater antagonistic forces. Points of no return eliminate lesser actions...

Pilot DNA and beats – Jamie Nash

Identify Story Type: Decide if your pilot is a premise or non-premise pilot. Choose stories that highlight your show's unique situation and challenge norms. Focus on a Key Story Chunk: For a premise pilot, focus on a story segment between your Opening Image and Break...

The wonky laws of pilot physics – Jamie Nash

Understand the Challenge: Crafting a pilot script is difficult; it must introduce your show, characters, and potential while being engaging and unique. Pilot Functions: A pilot should serve as a promise, a first date, a set-up, a launchpad, and a cathartic story,...

Best third acts, endings, lines

The Godfather Michael Corleone’s Baptism: Michael becomes the godfather of his sister’s child, symbolizing his complete transformation. Simultaneous Assassinations: As the baptism proceeds, Michael’s men execute a series of hits on the heads of the rival families....

Tips to help readers remember names and distinguish characters

1. Distinctive Names and Traits Unique Names: Choose character names that are distinct, easy to pronounce, and phonetically different from one another to avoid confusion. Avoid using names like "John" and "Jon." Physical Traits: Highlight unique physical features or...

Rewriting – Jim Mercurio

Tips for Writing and Rewriting Your Script Writing Phase Tips Explore Characters and Plot: Embrace discoveries about characters and plot twists. Deeply explore backstories and create nuances. Be open to changing the structure as new insights emerge. Commit to...

Concept, theme, visuals, breaking rules – Mercurio

Concept in Screenwriting Define a Clear Concept: Establish a high-concept story that can be pitched in one or two sentences. This should highlight the central conflict and potential developments. Create a Strong Hook: Develop an immediate attention-grabber that...

Character Development and Writing Dilemmas

Creating compelling characters and engaging stories requires a deep understanding of character flaws, growth, and dilemmas. This guide provides a comprehensive list of tips to help you develop complex, relatable characters whose internal conflicts drive your narrative...

14 Steps to a Better Screenplay – Jim Mercurio

This guide aims to enhance your screenplay writing by implementing 14 key steps. These steps incorporate the major principles of effective storytelling, scene construction, and character development. By following these steps, you can improve your scenes immediately...

indecent exposition – don’t tell

In cinematic storytelling, the power of visuals often surpasses that of dialogue, creating a more immersive and engaging experience for the audience. Screenwriters and directors must master the art of conveying emotions, actions, and character development through...

Dialogue – Jim Mercurio

Effective dialogue goes beyond mere conversation; it serves the story and scene by being a compressed and purposeful version of real-life speech. It’s more about the beats than the actual words, like in the classic scene from "On the Waterfront" where Terry's lament...

Non-dialogue: using visuals

Visual Storytelling over Dialogue: Movies rely heavily on visuals to tell the story. Effective storytelling uses actions, body language, and interactions with the environment rather than just dialogue. Replacing Dialogue with Visual Actions: Use visual beats to...

Reversals: The Essence of Surprise

Surprises, often called plot twists, turning points, or events, are crucial in storytelling. My favorite term is "reversal," highlighting the shift from buildup to surprise. Regardless of genre, a well-crafted reversal shares structural similarities. It's not just...

The Story of a Scene: Beat by Beat – Jim Mercurio

Scenes are the building blocks of screenplays, each focused on a single action and culminating in a change. Scene length varies by genre, and scenes must be unified by time and space, unfolding in real time. A scene's climax should bring about significant change,...

dialogue and subtext

1. Importance of Subtext: Dialogue should reflect how people communicate in real life—rarely straightforward. Characters often withhold information, hide emotions, and avoid certain topics, creating a layer of subtext beneath their spoken words. This underlying...

Using Dialogue to Write Emotion

Using Dialogue to Write Emotion Writing Dialogue to Reveal Emotions Effective dialogue combines verbal and nonverbal communication to reveal a character's emotional state. The way characters communicate—through words, body language, and vocal cues—can deepen...

from Emotion Thesaurus, ch 1-2

The Power of Emotion Emotion is fundamental to successful novels across all genres, driving characters' decisions, actions, and words, which in turn propel the story. Without emotion, plots become unengaging, and readers lose interest. Readers seek emotional...

science of storytelling

The science of storytelling has been a subject of increasing interest and research in recent years, as scholars explore how and why stories have such a powerful effect on the human brain. Here is a review of the key findings from the literature on the science of...

top tips from wired for a story by Lisa Cron

top 15 writing tips from "Wired for Story" by Lisa Cron: Hook Readers Early: Start with a compelling first sentence to draw readers in immediately. Understand the Brain's Desire: Stories should satisfy the brain's craving for information and understanding. Focus on...

The Importance of “Why” in Storytelling

Essence of Drama: Drama arises from characters facing the consequences of their actions. Protagonist's Motivation: Understanding why a conflict matters to the protagonist is crucial. The story is about the protagonist's internal changes, not just external events....

Lisa Cron – Story Genius – What If broken

"Story Genius: How to Use Brain Science to Go Beyond Outlining" provides a structured approach to developing a compelling story by leveraging personal experiences and emotional connections. The process begins with identifying the initial spark of the idea,...

8 plot structures in 1 – multiple choice

Act I: Setup (1% – 25%) Introduction: Ordinary World: Establish the protagonist’s normal life and environment. Theme Stated: Introduce the central theme subtly or explicitly. Inciting Incident/Catalyst: An event that disrupts the protagonist’s ordinary world and sets...

Chris Vogler Essence of Storytelling Masterclass Handout

It has occurred to me that when I need to distribute handouts for my classes and presentations, I can simply post them here and direct people to chrisvogler.wordpress.com so they can read, save or print them as desired. So here, and in the previous couple of posts,...

Writing drafts 1 and 2

Jul 3, 2024 from Inside the Room Getting Started with Your First Draft Trust Your Instincts: Believe in your story and your ability to tell it. Be Flexible: Understand that your script will evolve as you write. Be Concise: Focus on what’s important and avoid...

Act 2

Jul 2, 2024  Key Points on Mid-Point: Definition of Mid-Point: The Mid-Point is a crucial turning point in Act II of a screenplay. It connects the first and second halves of Act II. Typically occurs around page 60 in a standard 120-page script. Purpose of the...

How to Treatment

Jul 2, 2024  Syd Field guidance on writing a screenplay treatment, focusing on the importance of understanding and articulating the story’s core elements. Need for clarity and conciseness in the treatment, which should outline the plot in a structured manner, breaking...

Syd Field – Plot Points

Jul 2, 2024  Act I – Set-Up: Introduction to Characters and World: Establishing the protagonist’s ordinary world and daily life. Introducing key characters and their relationships. Setting up the protagonist’s goals and motivations. Inciting Incident: An event that...

James Scott Bell’s 14 signposts

Jul 2, 2024   Act I Disturbance Key Points: The story begins with an immediate disturbance that disrupts the protagonist’s ordinary world. This should be a compelling event that hooks the reader by introducing trouble or conflict right away. Importance: The...

structures and beats of scripts that elevate

Jun 15, 2024  Schindler’s List Act I: Setup Ordinary World: Oskar Schindler arrives in Krakow, Poland, aiming to profit from the war by employing Jewish workers in his factory. Call to Adventure: Schindler sees an opportunity to exploit Jewish labor and starts...

Make them cry

Creating moments that make readers or viewers cry from joy or awe involves a delicate balance of emotional buildup, relatable experiences, and profound revelations. Here are specific techniques to achieve this effect: Transformation and Redemption: Showing a...

Structure for growth and change

Jun 15, 2024  Creating a narrative that inspires people to feel they want to become better and do better things involves focusing on themes of growth, redemption, and the positive impact of personal change. Here’s a synthesis and reorganization of the various story...

Story structures – five syntheses

Jun 15, 2024  1. Universal Four-Act Structure Combining elements from different structures into a cohesive four-act framework that emphasizes key plot points and character development. Act I: Setup Ordinary World (Campbell): The hero’s normal life before the adventure...

Story structures by the book

Jun 15, 2024  Hero’s Journey (Joseph Campbell) Ordinary World: The hero’s normal life before the adventure begins. Call to Adventure: The hero is presented with a challenge or quest. Refusal of the Call: The hero hesitates or declines the adventure. Meeting the...

McKee – Story – Problems and Solutions

Jun 13, 2024  General Tips for Storytelling Maintain Audience Interest: Capture and sustain interest through time and reward it at the climax. Balance curiosity and concern to appeal to both intellect and emotion. Use Curiosity Effectively: Create open questions and...

Gap in progression

Jun 9, 2024  Concept Overview: The gap in progression is a narrative technique where the protagonist’s actions lead to unforeseen antagonistic forces, creating a gap between their expectations and reality. This forces the protagonist to adapt and take more significant...

Character questionnaire

Jun 4, 2024  Basic Information: Full Name: Age: Nationality: Background/Origin: Family and Relationships: Family members: Relationship with others Significant relationships outside the family Personality Traits: Key personality traits (e.g., introverted/extroverted,...

Top 20 on Character and Plot

Jun 9, 2024 Top 20 on Character Character Arc: Ensure characters undergo significant growth or change throughout the story. Relatability: Make protagonists likable or relatable to engage the audience’s empathy. Detailed Backstory: Develop comprehensive biographies to...

Top 20 from Top 20 books on writing for TV

Jun 9, 2024 Based on the top recommendations from various books on writing for television, here are the consolidated top 20 to 30 recommendations for aspiring TV writers: Concept and Idea Development Start with a Strong Concept: Develop a marketable and unique concept...

Top 25 from Top 20 books on storytelling

Jun 9, 2024 Here are 25 top tips and recommendations drawn from the 20 essential books on storytelling and screenwriting: Master Story Structure: Understand the fundamentals of story structure, such as the three-act structure (Syd Field) or the Hero’s Journey (Joseph...

Screenwriting 101 by Angus Fletcher

Jun 9, 2024 Top 25 tips from “Screenwriting 101”: Reverse Engineering: Identify the cognitive effect you want your script to have and trace it back to its story components to understand how to achieve it​. Story World Rules: Establish clear and simple rules for your...

Show Bible

Jun 9, 2024 A show bible, also known as a series bible, is a comprehensive document that outlines all the essential details about a television series. It serves as a blueprint for the show, ensuring consistency and providing a reference for writers, producers, and...

Scene construction, hero’s journey, 5-point finale

June 9, 2024 Scene construction is a critical component of effective storytelling in television writing. Here are some key elements and principles of scene construction, drawing on insights from various sources: Essential Elements of a Scene Objective: Each scene...

Notes on screenwriting

May 30, 2024 Aaron Sorkin Second draft, write the story over retype the whole thing Withhold information Build suspense◦ from fam but not audience (in on it) don’t just surprise◦ from both audience & often family Problem solving Arcs and sequences Plot twist –...